Analysis of Net of love!



Net of love!

What are these scenes unfolding,
Over the water of the lake,
Where boats are sailing though water is randomly flowing,
Is it a sight of motion with no mistake?

As the fisherman casts his net,
And its octagonal boundaries gradually sink into the water,
Where they now lie in their world wet,
And wait as octagonal shapes and one single net, when put together,

A shoal of fish swims freely and maybe happily too,
As they enter this octagonal mesh that waits in silence,
The fisherman feels something stir in his mind too,
And pulls the net breaking his wait of prolonged patience,

And he smiles at the fish struggling to break free,
He holds them one by one and tosses them on the floor,
This is how it has always been and this is how it shall always be,
The struggle for the floor to be the sky and for the sky to even invade the floor,

For what spring and summer tames as beauty,
Shall be confounded by the Autumn that appears to appear too soon,
For in the temple of life there is no deity,
There is only the law of bane and the boon,

So I watch the fish wriggle on the floor of the boat,
As my thoughts sail away with the one I love,
And I cast my net over the vast expanse of fate as I wait,
To notice in her the same feeling of love reflecting all over my net of love,

That I cast only to seek her attention and few smiles,
While her beauty glides throughout the universe,
Her charm is rendered eternal across the universe’s infinite miles,
And my net of love also gets cast across this endless universe!


Scheme A BCBC DEDE FGFG HIHI HJHJ XAXA KLKL
Poetic Form
Metre 111 1111010 10010101 11110110110010 11011101101 1010111 0101001001000101010 11110111 011010010110111010 01111100101001 111010100111010 01011010111 0101101110110 011101100111 1111110101101 111111101111111 010101110101011100101 1110101110 11010101010110111 1001011111100 11100111001 1110110101101 11110110111 0111110010111111 110000110110101101111 11110110010011 1010101010 011100100101001001 0111110110111010
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,531
Words 328
Sentences 3
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 150
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

This poem reflects the undiluted thoughts and feelings of love.

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Written on July 19, 2023

Submitted by javidaiw99 on July 19, 2023

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Javid Ahmad Tak

I have been writing poems for several years now. And my passion for poetry goes back to my school days, when I encountered Wordsworth's famous poem Daffodils, and I instantly fell in love with it, and the poet in me woke up. Since then I have been experiencing a wakeful poetic bliss! more…

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