Analysis of Misdeeding Brain Freezes



Misdeeding brain freezes.
Occurring momentarily.
A process to watch publicly.
Can not be avoided,
By those who continue...
To deceive humanity.
With expectations to believe,
The Almighty Creator of our existence...
Is a myth to allow delusions to fiction.
Giving some the permission,
To do and say...
Whatever they please wherever and when,
Done to accomplish...
An evil to do it.
Unexpectedly stopped to witness.
And this to observe,
The power God has to shut a mouth.
Before something else,
Inappropriately comes out of it.

Doesn't it seem,
There were times when people...
Actually knew the difference,
Between fantasy to fiction truth and reality.
Had been just that.
An entertaining escapism.
Understood to explain to prevent,
The minds of our children...
To avoid such mental traps.
Yet today,
Accepting craze to defend...
Has left many defending,
Nonsense fed to feed more of it to digest.
Leaving minds frozen.
Completely emptied of common sense.
As the escalating,
Of misdeeding brain freezes...
Become more obvious to witness,
A deceiving meant to intend it...
Begins to stop a mouth,
Prepared for more lies to hear heard.
To announce coming out of it.
From the top to the bottom.
Fed to feed to those below to reveal.

'What are we supporting,
To endorse and trust to keep believed?'

'Well...
Few still remain shocked,
They are not immortal forever to live entities.
And the rest refuse to accept and believe,
The Creator of our existence...
Is not a myth but has super powers.
Who has one threat to fear."

'What would that be?'

'Krytonite!
However...
It is the hope for most folks,
That the creating of artificial intelligence...
Will prove with evidence produced,
Humanity as is known today...
Will be a thing of the past.'

'For who or whom left to choose,
To remain and stay as benefactors.
Of this manufactured intelligence?'

'Well...
No one has yet to say,
How those challenges will be faced.
To hopefully correct more mistakes made!
Although...
Claims to make and denial to live it,
Will always seem the best weapon to use...
As a powerful tool to blame someone else!
If...
That 'someone else',
Has been programmed to be...
A thoughtful thinking,
Forgiving common sense using robot!'


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,222
Words 455
Sentences 54
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 19, 24, 2, 7, 1, 7, 3, 13
Lines Amount 76
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 213
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Written on July 26, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on July 26, 2023

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