Analysis of Piece Talks



With decisions made between them.
To begin division, chaos.
Successfully to implement this direction,
Without thought to use common sense.
Kept to keep from the majority of the people,
Their way of life...
Will eventually receive benefits seen.
If the people faithfully,
Pledged allegiance to an unknown scheme.
Intentionally meant to deceive their beliefs.

Continued are secret piece talks.
Bit by bit.
Destroying freedoms and entitlements.
While advancing to enhance,
A dancing to romance fiction to delude...
An acceptance of ethnic diversity,
Has begun to chip away a democracy.
Without proof or evidence of this to witness.

Yet...
People fooled and repeatedly duped,
By others who fraud and corrupt the truth.
Each day and night without a consciousness,
Used.
Will remain staying addicted and abused.
Regardless of the evidence and facts,
Packed upon their burdened backs.

Proving it shown and to them well known.
Those in positions grabbing power to rule,
Have only one agenda...
Determined to accomplish together.
In piece talks.
To purposely piece by piece to separate,
Themselves.
From the ones,
Supporting their efforts to endeavor...
A deception kept yet enthusiastically,
Followed.

By those who will never accept,
Participating in the putting to death...
A democracy to end.
While they applaud and cheer,
The demise of it.
And what had once been a greatness.
A greatness achieved by all races.

And still,
With a standing ovation!
Many applaud and cheer.
Done made to believe,
A Phoenix will be seen...
Rising from the ashes of self destruction!

What power grabbed to have it,
Can recreate, restore or imagine...
Having the ability to better innovate,
A humanity to believe...
God awaits and approve the doing,
The ruining of His, Her or Its creation.


Scheme XXAXXXBCXX DEXXXCCF XXXFGGXX XXXHDIXXHCX XXXJEFX XAJKBA EAIKXA
Poetic Form
Metre 10101011 10101010 010011001010 01111101 1111001001010 1111 101000011001 1010100 101011011 010001101101 01011011 111 0101000100 1010101 01010110101 10101100100 101110100100 011110011110 1 101001001 1101100101 1101010100 1 10110010001 0101010001 1011101 101101111 10010101011 1101010 0101010010 011 1100111110 01 101 0101101010 00101100100 10 11111001 0100001011 0010011 110101 00111 01111010 010011110 01 1010010 100101 11101 010111 10101011010 1101111 110011010 100010011010 00100101 101001010 010011011010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,769
Words 344
Sentences 37
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 10, 8, 8, 11, 7, 6, 6
Lines Amount 56
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 200
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Written on August 06, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on August 06, 2023

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