Analysis of On Wings/Night Wings



i spread my wings into the night
to swiftly fly on beams of light.
Bathing in the echoes of spiritual pools,
touching as with oceans of starlight

My love
there's something i really must confess
in your presence

with softly spoken expressions
of warmth and compassion

in acknowledgement
Of a friendship which to me reveals

A great deal more good-natured concern,
   Faithful strivings and fond remembrances

With a smile playing ever within your eyes
Even thru tears, joy and pain

With tenderness to grow
you walk into my life

each time when we meet
a surge of energy flows

Casting a signal fever passion
to sail beneath a sigh

Your kiss sets my trembling heart
Aflame
with a happiness

Which endures the day-to-day hardship
Unabated,

boiling over with the urge to love
Effortlessly and explosively

Unbound by the restrictions
of time/space perceptions

…asking, if you have ever
Found yourself upon the verge of inclination
absolutely tantalized

Helplessly fevered by the touch
At total depth of soul sensation

wondering if it will require
more than 80 kilocalories of pure emotion
to melt a block of ice

You are something special
of wonder and delight

Building with each moment more,

Expansions thru the spectrum of sensuality

With fragrances and pleasurable moods
As your spiritual flower blooms

In aura surroundings…
as our spirit soul arises

Dawning anew within …this universe
Upon a course unbound and true

In favor of a fellowship  

which in itself
Is love

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme AAXA BXX CD XX XX XX XX XX DX XXX EX BF CC GDX XD GDX XA X F XX XX XX E XB B
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 11011111 100010110001 10111011 11 110110101 0110 11010010 110010 00100 101011101 011111001 1010010100 10110100111 1011101 110011 110111 11111 0111001 100101010 110101 11111001 01 10100 101011110 010 101010111 10000100 0110010 111010 1011110 10101011010 01010 10010101 110111010 10011110 11111010 110111 111010 110001 1011101 0101010110 1100010001 111000101 010010 110101010 100101110 01010101 0101010 1001 11 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,544
Words 302
Sentences 2
Stanzas 25
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Written on November 03, 1983

Submitted by Charles2 on August 20, 2023

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