Analysis of Stars Under Cloudy Skies



Stars Under Cloudy Skies

Destiny awaits as stars under cloudy skies
The mud I tread through
Makes things tough going
Rain pours in unending rounds
The future is hard to see
Beneath showers
Falling on my tearful face
My stubborn feet won’t stop
Plodding is still progress
And the stars are still up there.

Sunshine still lights up the moon at night
Generating hope inside me
What I think I become
What I feel I attract
And what I imagine I create
The darkest hours are before dawn
Clouds may obscure
But winds change and blow away
Obstacles to success
And before honor comes humility.

Daring to do great means to shine bright
I am in the arena for a reason
It takes courage to advance
Wisdom to retreat
And cowardice to do nothing
I am an army of one
Moving forward under cloudy skies
The stars will change
Because I choose to go on
Until night turns to morning.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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Scheme A AXBXCXXXDX ECXXXXXXDC EFXXBFAXXB XX
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 100011110101 01111 11110 1100101 0101111 0110 1011101 110111 10111 0011111 11110111 1001011 111101 111101 011010101 010101011 1101 1110101 100101 0011010100 101111111 11000101010 1110101 10101 01001110 1111011 101010101 0111 0111111 0111110 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,128
Words 212
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 10, 10, 10, 2
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 181
Words per stanza (avg) 41

About this poem

Adversity just means stars shine under cloudy skies; it will pass when you keep going and never give up.

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Written on August 25, 2023

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on August 25, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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