Analysis of For One To Ask This Of Him (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



For One To Ask This Of Him   (Bussokusekika)

I made God cry once
When I asked him to teach me
His ways not man’s ways
He said they were tears of joy
He said he’d waited so long
For one to ask this of him

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   8/25/2023


Scheme A XXXXAX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 11111 1111111 11111 1110111 1111011 1111111 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 250
Words 52
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

This one is just a silly one I felt compelled to write while My Father deliberates my suggested sentence…I doubt anyone will come forth and return my signet seal before he does declare his final verdict…Oh well…Thus is life…

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Written on August 25, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on August 25, 2023

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