Analysis of Obsessively



It's been a struggle
 trying to live this life
Trapped in reality
 fighting the good fight
From the moment I meet you
You will stay the one I want
Always in my dreams
 Always in my thoughts
Pulling at my soul
and tugging at my heart
Engulfing my imagination
 and tantalizing my inner parts
At times the thought of you in my arms
Sends my mind in a rage
Burns a hole in my being
 but yet traps my heart in a cage
No matter where I turn
Visions of your face I clearly see
Playing tricks on my mental
Tutting me with a love
that will never be
But the desire that I cling to
Won't allow me to breath free
It suffocates my life
And utterly consumes me.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNONPCAQCECBC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 11010 101111 1010 10011 1010111 1110111 1011 1011 10111 010111 01010010 01001101 110111011 111001 1010110 11111001 110111 101111101 1011110 11101 11101 100101111 1011111 1111 0100011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 651
Words 134
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 510
Words per stanza (avg) 130

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Loving someone that will never be yours

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Written on April 29, 2023

Submitted by Jelisawarner on August 16, 2023

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