Analysis of Lost Chance



I waited, and waited
And finally got the chance
Yet when I tried to grab it
It slipped through my hands.

It feels like forever, when will my heart beat better?
I'll keep my head up, only for the future.
Those 8 simple letters
Hold more weight than than you can know.

Your life can change in the span of a few hours
You can leave to go somewhere, and come back without power.
It feels hopeless, woeful, so lost in the pain
And for those same people who hurt you, you feel disdain.

But, my emotions will not take me, not this day
I'll keep my head up, in hopes I can try again
And hope that one day I'll be able to say
That I love you again.


Scheme XXXX AABX BACC DEDE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 110010 0100101 1111111 11111 1110101111110 11111101010 11010 11111111 111100110110 1111110110110 11101011001 0111101111101 110101111111 111110111101 01111111011 111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 645
Words 142
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

A poem I wrote today after being broken up with in a polyamorous relationship with two people who I'd wanted to date for a long time.

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Written on September 10, 2023

Submitted by Snakeking6581 on September 10, 2023

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