Analysis of I wonder what's on cloud 9☁️



I wonder whats on cloud nine

I wonder what its like up on cloud nine,
Would the weather up there be fine,
Would the storm in my head clear,
Would it free me of all my anxiety and fear,

I wonder what it would be like up on cloud nine,
Would it just cross over country borderlines,
Or would it take me up into the sky,
Would it take me to a city in clouds up high

A city ive only ever imagine in your minds eye,  
A place of peace a place where life is beautified
That's free of impurities and the evils of our world,
A place I could only dream of, I guess it is a Dreamworld,

Oh how I wonder what it would be like on cloud nine
Would the weather up there be fine,
Would the storm in my head clear,
Would it free me of all my anxiety and fear,


Scheme a aABB axcc cddd aABB
Poetic Form
Metre 1100111 1101111111 10101111 1010111 1111111010001 110111111111 111110101 1111110101 111110100111 010110100100111 0111011111 111010000101101 01111011111101 1111011111111 10101111 1010111 1111111010001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 747
Words 174
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

The wondering of being on cloud 9☁️ Often in the phrase on cloud nine: a state of bliss, elation or happiness. quotations ▼ He was on cloud nine for days after she agreed to marry him.

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Submitted by #iwriteitall on September 11, 2023

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