Analysis of Evil Demon Lovers



Evil demon lovers.
Attracted to appearances of those,
Picked to perceive them easily defeated.
Taught from birth to be trouble makers.
Negative creatures seeking to destroy,
Peace kept to keep it wherever it exists.
As a reason for their wars.
With more to intend to start and begin,
To pretend themselves to be humanitarians!
While carrying Bibles.
Unopened.
Never to have used.
But they work as props to raise up to the sky!

Blinded they drive themselves to the edge.
These evil demon lovers.
Disguised yet pledging to be,
Wholesome and honest patriots.
Devoted to a great democracy.
When the cameras are on.
And focused upon their faces to masquerade.
With all media gone.
Along with taking attention to them given.
Away from them too,
Are the smiles hypnotic, charming and faked.

And far out of sight they remove their masks.
To brag about nothing more than themselves.
While someone stroking their egos exclaim,
How wonderful it is to be in their presence.
And broad again their smiles appear.
As if to continue beyond their ears.

This...
No one has to ask.
Since they have convinced themselves,
Above they are of any task.
As their disastrous journey nears its end.
By pretentiousness imitated to fiction,
Images to delude.
Idolize and worshipped.
Miraging reflections of themselves to see.
With a doing to prove it done to jump,
Off of the highest cliff.
Adorned in homemade Superman costumes!
Leaving their parachutes behind,
As collector souvenirs at a price high to pay.


Scheme AXXAXXXXXXXXX XABXBXXXCXX XDXXXX XEDEXCXXBXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 0101010011 11011100010 111111010 1001010101 11111010101 1010111 1110111001 10101110100 110010 010 10111 11111111101 101101101 1101010 0111011 10010100 0101010100 1010011 01001110101 111001 011100101110 01111 1010101001 0111110111 1101101101 111011001 110011110110 01011101 1110100111 1 11111 1110101 01111101 1101010111 11100110 100101 10010 101010111 1010111111 110101 0101110001 1011001 101001101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,484
Words 295
Sentences 34
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 13, 11, 6, 14
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 296
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Written on September 23, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on September 23, 2023

Modified by lpahtillah on September 23, 2023

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