Analysis of Stubbornly Without Pause To Continue



Stubbornly without pause to continue,
Acts of misdeeds done to do unto others.
And,
Can be the very same people,
Appearing well manner and dignified.
Claiming they can be trusted.
With a backstabbing intended to do.
Performed as examples,
Taught to teach their own children too.
Then unable to explain,
Why their trained to behave children...
Are Limited in common sense left brain dead.
After censoring books,
Banned from them to read...
From pre-school, middle and high school.
To hear it heard their children,
Are the cause and reason...
Their belligerent behavior,
Can no longer be tolerated.
In suburban isolated communities.

Nothing of this is mentioned on TV news.
In wholesome suburban communities.
Where these kids are bought weapons,
And taught to use them by parents.
Teaching their children,
How to defend themselves.
Against anyone attempting,
To take their entitled rights to say and do...
Whatever it is they like and please.
Done to express their lack if respect,
For anyone in a position of authority.

Including being told to sit down.
And act as if being human,
Is not as painful as they make it seem.
Leaving the child to decide,
Whether to shoot the teacher or not.
Or someone else introducing,
The benefits of discipline.
Before the cafeteria doors open.
To serve these innocent looking faces.
Either breakfast or lunch to begin a food fight!

It is not better schools or qualified teachers,
These children today need.
They need to be taught discipline.
And reverse psychology,
Taught at a bootcamp by training instructors.
Who can be relied upon to quickly forget,
Entitlements received and reason given!


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,629
Words 318
Sentences 30
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 20, 11, 10, 7
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 325
Words per stanza (avg) 67
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Written on September 25, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on September 25, 2023

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