Analysis of Depending upon the LORD



I lift up my soul to the Lord,
That I will not be put to shame;
And I remain in one accord,
To my foes that I do proclaim.

Each one of them should be ashamed,
For transgressing without a cause;
Their hostility has enflamed,
Making many treacherous flaws.

I need to know about the Lord,
To learn the focus of His path;
And by walking in one accord,
So I can be spared from His wrath.

I need to be led through His truth,
He is the God of salvation;
No longer shall I be uncouth,
As to be His new creation.

For I need His mercy and grace,
And giving of His steadfast love;
Like of old to feel His embrace,
His blessings flow from up above.

I asked forgiveness for my sin,
That I confessed my transgression;
Purifying me deeply within,
For His grace through my confession.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB XXAX ACAC DEDE FGFG HEHE X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111101 11111111 01010101 11111101 11111101 10100101 1010011 10101001 11110101 11010111 01100101 11111111 11111111 11011010 11011111 11111010 11111001 0101111 11111101 11011101 11010111 11011010 10011001 11111010 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 814
Words 185
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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Teach Me Your Paths Psalm 25:1-7

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Written on October 03, 2023

Submitted by richardnsherrer on October 02, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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