Analysis of When I Can't Find My Feet



It's "one of those days" again
Just like the ones before.
I've noticed how they all begin
And this is just one more.

On some days I have two left feet,
If I find them at all,
Which makes it hard to stop and greet
Someone before I "fall".

With foot in mouth, I might offend
A few along the way,
That's why I do try to amend
And lose naivete!


Scheme XAXA BCBC DEDE
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1111101 110101 11011101 011111 11111111 111111 11111101 10111 11011101 010101 11111101 01001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 342
Words 79
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

A silly commentary.

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Written on October 06, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on October 06, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on October 06, 2023

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