Analysis of Come Done



Time spent,
Come done to accomplish...
Nothing determined,
That anyone can say...
Has for them made no difference.
Or left significant benefits.
Is time spent,
To come with it done.
Hearing to listen to someone,
Choosing a way to blame and accuse...
Whoever is available to ruin their credibility.
And too often it is,
The one who has no idea...
What is going on to be given the attention.
To come done to attempt to explain,
Their involvement.

'I was told to keep my mouth closed.
But no one as of yet,
Has given me a reason why!'

'That to say and admit,
Makes no sense at all.
Then can you tell me this,
Who are the people blaming to accuse you...
In participating in their ruthless activities?'

'Well...
As I was cleaning out the trash,
Left under the circus tent.
I recognize them to be the clowns,
Removing their masks and costumes.
Then I saw them change,
Into business suits carrying briefcases.
And told to keep my mouth closed.
When immediately I asked,
One who claimed was running for president.
I identified later he was serious.
And...
To my surprise,
He was the master of ceremonies.
The main clown of them all.'

'Okay.
And who would that be?'

'I was told to keep my mouth closed.
However...
My guess would be,
The one still wearing the mask!
And demanded I hand over all the trash,
I collected from under the tent.'


Scheme axbcxxaddxefxdxx Gxx xhxxi xjaxxxfgxaxbxih ce Gxexja
Poetic Form
Metre 11 111010 10010 11011 11111100 110100100 111 11111 1011011 100111001 0101010011010100 011011 01111010 1110111100010 111101101 1010 11111111 111111 11010101 111001 11111 111111 11010101011 0010001100100 1 11110101 1100101 11011101 01011001 11111 0110110010 0111111 10100011 111110110 10101011100 0 1101 110101100 011111 1 01111 11111111 10 1111 0111001 00101110101 101011001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,334
Words 294
Sentences 32
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 16, 3, 5, 15, 2, 6
Lines Amount 47
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Written on October 07, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on October 07, 2023

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