Analysis of I hate you I forgive you I love you

Nigel 2006 (Morogoro)



I was born to love but you make it easier hate
I hate you for the person you’ve turned me into
I hate you for sins you made me do
I hate you because you made me hate the ones i love
I hate you because you made me lose my trust for you
I hate you for turning my emotions to something i don’t want to feel
I hate you for the what you did make me feel
I hate you for making me feel bad for being in a relationship
I hate you for making me feel like i was competing to win ur heart
I hate you for manipulating me into opening my heart to you
I always hated you because u turned the love that i was born with into hatred I shall live with

II
I don’t forgive you because I’m a forgiving person
I forgive you because thats what i was taught to do
I forgive you because i want peace
I forgive you because grudges summon problems
I forgive you because i want to change
I forgive you because i want YOU to change
I forgive you for making me live with that hatred
I forgive you because my God told me to do so
I forgive you for everything
I forgive myself for everything

III
i was born to love but because of you I didn’t feel it anymore
I love You for your beautiful smile
I love you cuz your face makes me gaze till I’m caught staring at you
I love you cuz ur eyes r like a blackhole n i would get sucked into them every time we locked eyes  
I love you because your voice is so euphonic it puts me in a trance the moment i hear it
I love you because of the way u made my body feel
I love you because of the way you carry yourself
I love you for making me look better
I love you for making me feel comfortable
I will always love you for letting me realize that this is not true love.


Scheme XAABACCXXAX DXAXXEEXXFF DXXAXXCXXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111001 111101011101 111111111 1110111110111 1110111111111 111110101011011111 11110111111 11111011111000010 111110111110101111 111101001011001111 111010111011111101101111 1 11011011001010 1011011111111 101101111 101101101010 1011011111 10110111111 1011110111110 1011011111111 1011110 1011110 1 1111110111111101 111111001 1111111111111011 1111111101111110111001111 1110111111111001010111 11101101111101 1110110111001 1111101110 111110111000 11111110110111111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,714
Words 382
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 11, 11, 11
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 437
Words per stanza (avg) 118
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Written on July 16, 2023

Submitted by nigelsasali9 on September 02, 2023

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