Analysis of Ripples In The Night
Ripples In The Night
You arrive undressed
Dark lovely hair
Flowing freely
All amorous shaped
Cool as shadows
Curves swaying
A sensual stride
In sexual fanfare
I am undone by you
My composure
Comes all apart
The gravity of your gaze
Arrests my attention
Under your trance
A blue moon unexpected
Takes up my eyes
Subtly and completely
In your amorous aperture.
Seems way too long
Since I have been
Asleep in absence
Waiting here for you
The face of time
Moves forward
Your warm arms
Wrap me up
Inside your embrace
I am breathless
Your skin
Soft as water
Brushes me
Electric affections
Punctuate
Your kiss
Our mouths
Coupling in wet circles.
Becoming living shades
Of colorful hues
We paint the room
All our own
Our bed
Quickly turns into
A wonderland
Two lovers
Playing each other
Making music
In breathy moans
Reciting I love you
Made for this
We create
Our recipe of love,
Lips and verse
Rewriting stars
Flashing hearts
As ripples in the night.
Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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| Metre | 10001 10101 1101 1010 11001 111 110 01001 01001 110111 1010 1101 0100111 011010 1011 011010 1111 1000010 01100100 1111 1111 01010 10111 0111 110 111 111 01101 1110 11 1110 101 010010 10 11 101 100110 010101 11001 1101 1101 101 10101 010 110 10110 1010 0101 010111 111 101 1010011 101 0101 101 110001 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 1,211 |
| Words | 223 |
| Sentences | 5 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 18, 18, 19, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 58 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
| Words per line (avg) | 4 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 196 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 42 |
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