Analysis of Thou I Walk Thru The Life Of Humanity



Thou I Walk Thru The Life Of Humanity
From death to life in peace we find
Maps and guides inprisons our minds
Tru wrongs and rights we cannot find
For the presence of sin is within us all
Those who crawl will never fall
But deep inside they’ll hold a flaw
Attached to things that we’ll never keep
In a lucid dream ,unaware were sleep
Trapped in a world that isn’t real
Obsessed with a word we crave to feel

Thou I Walk Thru The Life Of Humanity
Love and pain are great to feel
Like drugs to a soul that cannot heal
To limit a mind to just one place  
Prevents its spirt from exploring new space
From birth to life in a shell we hide
To learn our energy before we die
Not to worship those who came before
Or label our worth by rich or poor

Thou I Walk Thru The Life Of Humanity
Disappointed and hurt by i what I see
The pleasure of greed, justified by suffer  
For a man deemed rich may possess another
We destroy this earth ,we call our Mother
 And kill the man we call our brother

Thou I Walk Thru The Life Of Humanity
Pleasure and joy fuels our spirits
While hate and greed destroys our energy
We give we take
We laugh we cry
We love we hate
Inside this matrix we’ll forever stay
Misunderstood is what I forever remain
Because real is rare in a world so fake
Where following the leader makes you saint
And belief in a  religion decides your fate
          Disappointed and Misguided
              Thou I Walk Thru The Life Of Humanity

~MIH MA I
                                                                   LeahciM


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Poetic Form
Metre 11110110100 11110111 1011101 11011101 10101110111 1111101 11011101 011111101 001010101 1001111 011011111 11110110100 1011111 111011101 110011111 0111101011 111100111 11101000111 111011101 1101011111 11110110100 0100111111 0101110110 10111101010 10111111010 0101111010 11110110100 1001101010 11010110100 1111 1111 1111 0111010101 00111101001 0111100111 1100010111 00100010111 0100010 11110110100 111 1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,649
Words 320
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 11, 9, 6, 13, 2
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 227
Words per stanza (avg) 56
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Written on April 27, 2023

Submitted by Michaels6797 on October 11, 2023

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