Analysis of When Valentines Don't Come



I know that I do not do well
In making friends inside my shell
Which I can't leave behind.

But does the world fulfill a need
In making sure I don't succeed
With what won't leave my mind.

How could I when the phone won't ring
Nor when the mailman does not bring
A valentine to me.

I don't stand out, it's obvious.
I'm socially superfluous
In my invisibility.  


Scheme AAB CCB DDE FFE
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 01010111 111101 11010101 01011101 111111 11110111 1101111 01011 11111100 110010 0100100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 363
Words 77
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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No real friends

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Written on October 14, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on October 14, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on October 14, 2023

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