Analysis of Flying on my knees



Swaying in the breeze of your eye
Through the tree of your life
Inside rainbows brighten me
Albatross journey over the sea
Rain men sail unseen
To a lighter place

Fish feel each turn of the tide
Angles move in their eyes
As I kneel in the street
And cross my body
Seals pop out of ice into the skies
So bow to the God who sang inside my mind

Hidden ray's jump out of the sand
Tropical colour filled my song today
Counting waves on waves of love
My anger fades with clouds above


Scheme XXAAXX XBXABX XXCC
Poetic Form
Metre 10001111 101111 011101 10101001 11101 10101 1111101 101011 111001 01110 111110101 11101110111 10111101 100111101 1011111 11011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 481
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Written on October 17, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 17, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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