Analysis of Pubescence and the teacher



My love for you heals my broken heart
So lost in time yet
Your sound still so soothing
Eyes so bright they befriended my soul
I could not look to catch your eyes
Your wisdom taught me in disguise
how impressive you were to me
I was calm in your room yet so bound from thee
You pulsed my heart and warmed my innocent cheeks
Our future so short yet my life set free from yours
Though I felt deep down that you also loved me
Through pain and work then stability
I find myself remembering your glee
As you sat with us all beneath the blossom tree
I saw the innocence you shared with me


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111111101 11011 111110 111101011 11111111 11011001 10101011 11101111111 11110111001 1010111111111 11111111011 110110100 111010011 111111010101 1101001111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 582
Words 116
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 466
Words per stanza (avg) 116
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Written on October 17, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 17, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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