Analysis of Peaches and stars



Why do we treat God like roadkill.
Say what we wait for
Shout what we hate for
Life is a journey blinded by lights.
See beyond the fear.

When I saw my first dead fox I wondered whether it's soul was watching
I'm sure it was
Maybe it still is
Calling, remember me?
Keeping watch over you every 4am shift
It was gifted to this earth
Seeking
Finding
Then one day it couldn't take the brake
That was your job, still is unless its devine


Scheme XAAXX BXXXXXBBXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 1111111 11111 11111 110101011 10101 11111111101011110 1111 10111 100101 10110110011 1110111 10 10 111110101 11111101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 436
Words 91
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 10
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 170
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Written on October 24, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 24, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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