Analysis of Just being around causes poo! At times.



Around.
Poo.
I liked to poo. Then I ate too many beans.
Then I got hemeroids pulling out of me.
They were poo.
The operation hurt like a bullet.
Even the nurses didn't know what to do.
Poo. Their tea burnt too. Phew, then I'll be gone.
Now my but is in agony when I sit, when I stand, when I walk.
It's poo.
Sometimes it doesn't hurt at all, not being mur-dered like most things on TV.
Phew!
My face swelled like gunk in a loo.
That was poo. 9 golden days of restful hurt beyond my imagination.
Cats fuck lol... Kittens ew that's poo.
Life's hard when you spend all night thinking why you even want sex but your body wants to move, nothing but an arch angel, or a God.
Am I trying to be God?
That's poo.
There'd be no one left to follow but your mind down the rabbit hole.
Cool? No, poo.
You'll try to live too. Hop little bunny.
Sometimes you'll be the shit, poo.
Sometimes the poo!
Hard hitting shit right? Wrong?


Scheme ABCDBEBFGBDBBHBIIBJBDBBK
Poetic Form
Metre 01 1 11111111101 111110111 101 001011010 10010101111 1111111111 11110100111111111 11 0111011111011111111 1 11111001 11110111010110010 11110111 11111111011101111101111011110101 1110111 11 1111111011110101 111 1111111010 0111011 0101 110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 928
Words 203
Sentences 33
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 683
Words per stanza (avg) 180

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Angelics. Bun.

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Written on October 26, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 26, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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