Analysis of A Flawed Mommy
A Flawed Mommy,
Loyal and true,
Flawed
to the Darkest pieces of my soul.
Tarnished and worn,
Darkness envelopes,
Unable to breathe,
Unable to see.
Broken, lost,
They cry out for me,
Panicked,
Searching.
In the distance,
Carried in the arms of an angel,
The winds of change;
I'm drawn to it's energy,
Frantically,
Running
I feel gloriously Peaceful.
I feel happy.
It is the end .
It is every thing.
It is more,
It is heaven.
I feel myself Drifting,
Suddenly thunder crashes,
Lightening rips up
Everything loved By me.
Gone, the happy times,
Gone, my dreams
Lost forever,
My girls,
Gone too.
Ripped from my arms,
Torn away by hate,
Isolated and Ignored,
Just because they could .
Lost, a child hood,
Unconditionally loving mommy,
Who wanted only,
To love and be loved.
Instead, dreams of smiles,
Sounds of laughter,
Unimaginably,
Picture-perfect happiness
By all three
Lost in the stars,
Down a worm hole,
Figment of imagination,
Crushed, simply Because
they could.
Scheme | ABXC XXXA XAXD XEXA ADEA XDXF DXXA XXGXB XXXH HAAX XGCXA XCFXH |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0110 1001 1 101010111 1001 1010 01011 01011 101 11111 10 10 0010 100011110 0111 1111100 1000 10 11100010 1110 1101 111001 111 1110 11110 1001010 10011 10111 10101 111 1010 11 11 1111 10111 100001 10111 1011 010001010 11010 11011 01111 1110 1 1001100 111 1001 1011 1010010 11001 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 974 |
Words | 216 |
Sentences | 13 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 5, 5 |
Lines Amount | 51 |
Letters per line (avg) | 15 |
Words per line (avg) | 3 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 62 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 14 |
About this poem
Life is a Mother who's Flaws cost her the ultimate price, her daughters.
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Submitted on October 27, 2023
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