Analysis of Celebrated Victories, Gone



What hatred stays benefit,
Who.
What wars to escalate them,
Get to prove.
Besides a hopeful win.
With no one left to begin,
A peace believed humanity...
Will ever see again.

Not even warriors of horrors,
Are left to be awarded.
And praised.

Gone.
Celebrated victories,
Gone!
Not even warriors of horrors,
Are left to be awarded.
And praised.

What hatred stays to benefit,
Who.
What wars to escalate them,
Get to prove.
Besides a hopeful win.
Humanity will ever see again.

Not even warriors leaving horrors behind,
Are left awarded or be praised.

Gone.
Celebrated victories kept in memories,
Gone.
Celebrated victories kept in memories,
Gone.

What hatred stays to benefit,
Who.

What hatred stays to benefit,
Who.

What hatred stays to benefit...
Who!


Scheme aBCDEexf GHI JkJGHI ABCDEf xi JKJKJ AB AB AB
Poetic Form
Metre 1101100 1 111101 111 010101 1111101 01010100 110101 110100110 1111010 01 1 100100 1 110100110 1111010 01 11011100 1 111101 111 010101 0100110101 110100101001 11010111 1 10010010100 1 10010010100 1 11011100 1 11011100 1 11011100 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 756
Words 168
Sentences 23
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 8, 3, 6, 6, 2, 5, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Written on October 27, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on October 27, 2023

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