Analysis of I Must No Longer be Me



Life isn’t what it used to be,
It hasn’t been very good to me.
I wander through this world looking for purpose, hiding my pain just below the surface.
Wearing this mask of happiness, while inside I feel pain and emptiness.
Walking down this long and lonely road in the pouring rain, I feel lost, alone and in terrible pain.
The pain is unbearable, it’s more than I can stand, slowly it’s consuming me like quicksand.
I’m helpless, I’m trapped and I have no doubt, that there is only one way out.
There is only one way I can truly be free, I must no longer be me….


Scheme AABBCDEA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 11110111 110111101101011101010 101111001011110100 1011101010010111101001001 0110100111111101010111 110110111111110111 1110111110111111011
Characters 579
Words 115
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 54
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 432
Words per stanza (avg) 108

About this poem

Written in some of my darkest days.

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Written on April 04, 2021

Submitted by Athomentexas2002 on November 07, 2023

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Tonya Richardson

I’m a 54 year old married mother of 2 daughters. I suffer from severe anxiety and depression. Poetry is my way of coping. more…

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