Analysis of I wish to not wish



I wish to be freed from my humanity
I wish I could be non more than a vessel for ponder
I want to write freely through my own will
I don't want to be a slave to my fodder

I wish I won't want
I wish I won't wish
I don't want to need
I just wish to think

trapped in an endless cycle
urge after urge, need after four
I want not to be stuck here anymore
I wish I could escape to a realm of wonder
where no needs are present, so I could finally ponder

What are we at the end of the day?
Dolls for our minds? Or prisons for the same?
We are just a culmination of matter animated in such a way
that makes us hunger


Scheme XAXA XXXX XBBAA CXCA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111110100 11111111010110 1111101111 11111011110 11111 11111 11111 11111 1011010 11011101 111111101 111101101110 11111011110010 111101101 11101110101 11100101101000101 11110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 611
Words 138
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

I'm often disturbed by my human needs. being tossed around from urge to the next, it takes much of my time that I wish I could spend elsewhere, recently I've been pondering philosophical questions, and coming up with philosophies of my own.

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Written on November 09, 2023

Submitted by bluebirb on November 09, 2023

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