Analysis of Cabarnet or Chardonnay



Cabernet
or
Chardonnay
Does he touch you with deep cabernet dreams, or is it just chardonnay passion, does your heart race from his nearness, is there surrender in his scent, does he tempt you, does he leave you breathless, are you tantalized by jalapeno kisses, like butterflies stinging spicy pleasure on your inner thighs, does he entice you, do you feel wicked and waxened, do you scream bruja's incantations, moan verses of ancient runes, is your orgasm seismic, does he read like a mystery with a hint of gypsy blood, can he make you laugh in color, does he feed your madness, can he calm your storm, or does he consume you, does he feel betrayed by your shadow, is he envious and jealous of your light, does he sit in stillness while you listen to your muse, does he make you feel whole, does he, does he,
i did once, didn't i?
JSB


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Poetic Form
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Characters 841
Words 158
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 110
Words per line (avg) 26
Letters per stanza (avg) 657
Words per stanza (avg) 154

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The question that lives forever to ask a past love about her new partner.

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Written on October 23, 2016

Submitted by judge_s on November 11, 2023

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Judge Santiago Burdon

The Odyssey of Judge Santiago Burdon began in Chicago, Illinois His poems, short stories and prose have been featured in over two hundred fifty print magazines, online literary magazines, anthologies, and podcasts. Santiago was recognized in "Who's Who of Emerging Writers 2000" and again in 2001. He has had 6 books of short stories and 2 books of poetry published by 3 different presses in the USA as well as Europe. This 21st century "Nelson Algren" is considered to be one of the most influential writers of raw fiction of our time. more…

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    Cabernet is spelled incorrectly in the title how do I edit?
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