Analysis of No more hiding

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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No more hiding

As the darkness selfishly lingers the sun gets excited about his new day appearance and allows no more time to stall his arrival.  Unlike the sun's benefits the darkness does very little for the land of man but hide the truth. Like big brother the sun will allow no dishonesty as well will force the truth to come out of the corners and be known by all.


Scheme XX X
Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
Metre 1 1110 10101100110100111101000111111101001011000101101010111110111100110110100111101111101001111
Characters 382
Words 72
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 102
Words per line (avg) 24
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Written on November 13, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on November 13, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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