Analysis of What do you care for

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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What do you care for.

As the morning sun slowly rises it pays tribute to all the colors of the rainbow by introducing them to the sky. The benefit is to those watching this and filling it to memory.  So many souls over the centuries have experienced this and that only brings more value to life. Because the technology constantly changes and society changes these things brings a more interesting picture and value to daily life. One of the many things that don't change is the need for love and togetherness among all people. Things that are not of the soul vanish with time but not the need among the population inregards to love and lifting each other up. The value of life revolves around enhancing and saving ones soul throughout all the ages. The redemption of life can only be upon starting and maintaining the care we provide to one another. Love caring and kindness has no shelf life so let's continue on with these things that give life life and keep the value of life high up on a pedestal towards the Heavens but still in reach of all man kind.


Scheme XX X
Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
Metre 1 11111 1010110101110110101011010110101001111010101110011011001001010010110111011010010010010001001011101100100101101110101111101110010001110111110110111101010010111010110101011010101001011011010001011110101100010011011101011001011111101011111111010101111101000101011011111
Characters 1,070
Words 196
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 288
Words per line (avg) 65
Letters per stanza (avg) 432
Words per stanza (avg) 98
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Written on November 18, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on November 18, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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