Analysis of As Is Felt To Feel Meant



It can not be us.
Expected to trust.
Each other anymore.
When before we vowed,
Between us trust was a must.

Too many has been a forgiveness given.
Just one too many times,
Has there been a forgetting to be reminded...
Becoming less forgetting done.
Until the doing of it left,
None to regret memories of tears wept.
With a wanting to wish it heard,
Mistakes we both made...
Weren't deserving of the hurt and pain.

It can no longer be us.
To be lovers again.
Or even friends.
And it would be best,
For the both of us to close that door.
Walking away.
Left to leave to stay that way.
As is to be.
Living separate lives.
Without deceiving each other to believe,
One day we'll be back together again.8
To say never felt to feel it meant.


Scheme ABCXB DXXDXXXXX AEXXCFFXXXEX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 01011 11001 10111 0111101 11011001010 111101 111001011010 01010101 01010111 1101100111 10101111 01111 1001010101 1111011 111001 1101 01111 101111111 1001 1111111 1111 10101 01010110101 1111101001 111011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 735
Words 167
Sentences 20
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 9, 12
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 187
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Written on November 19, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on November 19, 2023

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