Analysis of When things go ary

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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When things go ary

Days like this when your toast doesn't come out like you like. When the needed words escape you there will be days like this. When your nightmare seems so real and you can't go back to sleep and you have a big presentation at work tomorrow how worried you are. When your kids leave their Legos out and your barefeet sound the alarm. Look towards the Heavens and Thank God for the opportunity to refocus your thoughts and desires on what makes life so real and blessed. It's the food you have to overcook. It's the children you have attached to those Legos. It's the bed you were woken up from. It's those persons present to witness your loss of words. There will be days like this.


Scheme XX X
Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
Metre 1 11110 1111111011111101010111111111111110111111011010101101110111111111011100110101001110010010101100101111110110111101101011011111011010111110101101111111111
Characters 715
Words 134
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 189
Words per line (avg) 44
Letters per stanza (avg) 283
Words per stanza (avg) 66
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Written on November 20, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on November 20, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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