Analysis of I've never not had you

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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I never not had you.

In our bed dreaming and your absence is felt. I asked the moon to shine down where you are and it shines on your side of our slumber. For a moment when I thought you were gone panic set in and I was uncentered and off balance. In our recipe of togetherness you are the most important part of these perfect ingredients and everyone feels it as well. When I have you to gaze upon and smile at there is no other perfect condition that I'm in. You are the favor and flavor in and of me.


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Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
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Characters 518
Words 105
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 135
Words per line (avg) 34
Letters per stanza (avg) 203
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Written on November 22, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on November 22, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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