Analysis of Concurs Rain On Six Mountains (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Concurs Rain On Six Mountains   (Bussokusekika)

Shall we play a game
I spy with my little eye
It’s something that’s red and black
My response will be Grape Ape
IF My Father’s Merkabah
Concurs rain on six mountains

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   11/25/2023


Scheme A XXAXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 01111101 11101 1111101 1101101 1011111 11101 0111110 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 263
Words 45
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

I could try to explain this one to ya’ll…But I believe my words will be wasted and in vain…Oh well…Ya’ll can’t say that I didn’t try my best…I wonder IF My Father Jehovah will decide to join in on this party???Only time will tell…”Grape Ape Grape Ape” That was such a silly cartoon…They don’t make them like that anymore…lol…Bah Bah Black Sheep…Blah blah…

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Written on November 25, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on November 26, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on November 26, 2023

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