Analysis of Calling for Help



Oh that He would rend Heaven,
The earth shakes when he comes down;
Mountains become uneven,
As buildings crumble in town.

When fire kindles brushwood,
Fire makes the water boil;
The adversaries’ falsehood,
Stir from chaotic toil.

When He did the awesome things,
He came down as mountains quake;
As the flowing water brings,
The rivers for the trees’ sake.

From of old no one has heard,
By the ear or eye to see;
But to those who are prepared,
For Him to send a decree.

With joy, He works righteousness,
Remembers you in your way;
The times that you did trespass,
Confession from whence you stray.

We have all become unclean,
Polluted the righteous deeds;
Not the way we should have been,
The iniquity impedes.

For we all fade like a leaf,
That wind has driven away;
Causing us much disbelief,
Because we do disobey.

There is one who calls your name,
Who rouses to take a hold;
It is us that must proclaim,
You know that the prophets told.

For you have hidden your face,
Your sinning melts in His hand;
Confessions have brought His grace,
As He utters His command.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF CGCG XHXH XIXI JHJH KCKC LCLC X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110 0111111 1001010 1101001 11011 1010101 01001 110101 1110101 1111101 1010101 0101011 1111111 1011111 1111101 1111001 1111100 0101011 011111 0101111 1110101 0100101 1011111 0010001 1111101 1111001 101101 011101 1111111 111101 1111101 1110101 1111011 1101011 0101111 1110101 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,116
Words 243
Sentences 10
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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Celebrating God's mercy Isaiah 64:1-7

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Written on December 07, 2023

Submitted by richardnsherrer on December 06, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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