Analysis of Gaza’s Shadow



Gaza’s Shadow
By William He

Here death sleeps not far from them,
Stones that once were a house carrying stories and secrets,
Children’s eyes wide open without sin.
For years the cycle has bound them in pain,
A dance of violence with no end to the chain.
The groans of mothers pulsating over and over in the ears.
The trapped mosques make an orchestra of their hunger,
Who will brush off the dead leaves,      
The life constantly wears its black dress.
Gods play dice once again,
Sparing a thought for the indifference,
Reconciling offenders and making Justice drop her angry rod.

The wounds are turning into a kind of weaponry in a flash,
The world wondering what led them astray,
Endless dirge distilling a distinct urge.
Gaza In Lens flying high with no sound,
Tunnels anger revenge blood oaths burn,
Allah should have power to stop this troublesome people here,
Though Solomon's Temple gone from sight its memory bright,
When sorrow strikes the ground,
A tale of conflict, suffering and hopes.
Crumbling with the weight,
In tiny cracks along the sacred wall,
People are reading their Mincha-prayer in the mournful tones.

疏影 加沙
作者:何威廉

火曹尺咫,
见石头默祷,
地底凝视。
泣尽眸昏,
心脉无声,
旧鬼烦怨新鬼。
牵袍顿足清真寺,
两相摧、
吊殇谁至。
怅选民、
精魄何依,
几处今宵伤毁。

残血偏沾别泪,
内热焦肺腑,
髭愤髯悱。
夜行登宵,
地道幽通,
死海重生礼洗。
所罗门殿无消息,
亦怜恤、
乱危蚕蚁。
彼鼻息、
天地恩私,
忏悔哭墙缘罪。


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Poetic Form
Metre 11 1101 1111111 11100110010010 101110011 1101011101 011100111101 011101010010001 011111001110 1111011 011001111 111101 1001100100 1000100101010101 0111001011100001 0110011101 1010100011 1001101111 101001111 101110111100101 11001011111001 110101 0111010001 100101 0101010101 1011011100101 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,604
Words 247
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 12, 12, 2, 12, 12
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 150
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

A poignant and evocative portrayal of the ongoing conflict and suffering in Gaza. The poem captures the enduring pain and longing for peace in a place marked by suffering and turmoil.

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Written on July 11, 2023

Submitted by chinamcc8 on December 07, 2023

Modified by chinamcc8 on December 07, 2023

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William He

William Yu He graduated from two of the most prestigious law schools in China respectively, also studied in Heidelberg, Cambridge and Harvard. He has already published dozens of Chinese classical poems and lyrics. The Incumbent President of China quoted his classic poem in 2017. The President of Harvard University recognized his achievements in June, 2021. more…

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