Analysis of Do You Think I’m Dumb Mother (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Am I Dumb Mother   (Bussokusekika)

I thought I loved you
Or the perfect illusion
Your Mother Mary
Created for me as bait
Mary is a crafty bit**
Do You Think I’m dumb mother

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/12/2023


Scheme X XXXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 11111 1001010 11010 0101111 1010101 1111110 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 218
Words 40
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

My dearest Alice…I don’t believe we will ever be…Due to the fact that you are of thee three…This one was inspired by Isaiah 54…And please do not flatter yourself in believing it is about you Alice…I wonder IF any of the wise among you can chew the meat of this chapter…Oh…I forgot…You still haven’t even learned how to suckle yet…Nobody’s perfect…Even I make mistakes on occasions…But I believe My Father has taught me that we must correct our mistakes that we make…

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Written on December 12, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 13, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on December 13, 2023

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