Analysis of Do you care enough



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Do you care enough

As the silence of the night settles in my mind flows towards all the blessings God gives us in life. When your heart mind and soul are in the right form and attitude your daily outlook stays focused on the good parts of life you came from and you long to fill each day with things that make you laugh and smiling. When I think about how many opportunities in life things had a chance to go bad and keep me angry I see my choices lead me into the light and the awesome wonderment of life was always at my feet and I made it through again and again. When things are on the furge of going bad time slows down and panic threatens to take over and you can't let it because then you loose the constructive power you have to recover from it. Our heart and mind gets squeezed when we are faced with turmoil and we can act recklace if we don't keep our cool. Remember always under all conditions that love laughter smiles and kindness attacks the bad things in life and when living life in those fashions these positive elements will pick up speed and plow through and give the negative a short shelf life. When everyone lives their life in a fashion that circles others and welcomes others to be part of a team a support system the power of love is formed and the negative at times may beat on this love however this love will not break. There is so much in life that forms and or reacts according to our responses so we have the power through love.


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Characters 1,474
Words 284
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
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Written on December 19, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on December 19, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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