Analysis of Quietus



Fear my gaze, accept me if you can
All the same to me
Those that have met me are forever silent
Those that have not, believe they are above me

Your powerlessness is not your fault
Profound or ignorant ? matters not
I do not wish to engage you, educate you
I do not seek your point of view

I will follow you till the end
I am faithful
and my concern- willful
I will keep the promise i made to you
I will extinguish you, whiten your hue

Make your memories, do your deeds
Be honorable, be wretched
All the same to me
I know you all too well
I watch you flourish and swell
Not by choice but to do my bidding

All that freedom you waste
Darkening your soul that was once chaste
In fantasies that drain you, you slowly unbecome
An ideal slave to your ambition you have become
Suffocated? respited?
All the same to me

All I do is watch with a cold gaze
As I guide you safely into my clutches
I assure you, I am never in stitches
when your eyes gloss over for the last time
I usher in your final gasp to make you mine

I take those that taketh, I take those that giveth
I cease the evil from spreading their disease
I fleece the good from sullying their legacy
King or peasant I claim all
I do my bidding for I am dutiful after all

Unlike you, I am lonely
Have no one that will claim me
I am immortal and have no legacy
I have no will, a slave myself
I don’t regret it, unlike you
Like clockwork, I will always take my cue

When I have your heart in my grasp
While I begin to hear your breath starting to rasp
I will do my part and take you
Too soon? Too late?
All the same to me


Scheme xAba xxcc xddcc xxAeex ffaxbA xxxxx xxagg aaaxcc hhcxA
Poetic Form
Metre 111011111 10111 11111101010 11110111011 110001111 011100101 11111011101 11111111 11101101 1110 010110 1110101111 1101011011 11100111 11000110 10111 111111 1111001 111111110 111011 100111111 01001111101 1011110101101 1001 10111 111111011 11111001110 10111110010 1111101011 110011011111 111110111110 11010110101 1101111100 1110111 11110111100101 0111110 1111111 11010011100 1111011 11011011 11111111 11111011 110111111011 11111011 1111 10111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,586
Words 337
Sentences 6
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 6, 6, 5, 5, 6, 5
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

I am a writer that writes about my experiences with life. But there is no life without the anticipation of demise. We all experience life- cherish it, but death needs a voice as well. This poem is death's monologue to us.

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Written on December 10, 2023

Submitted by nandkishoresrinivasan on December 10, 2023

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