Analysis of Obedient Prayers



Here we have no lasting city,
But the one to come that we seek;
No need for us to take pity,
Since we inherit as the meek.

Through Christ we offer sacrifice,
A sacrifice of praise to God;
In return, He gives us advice,
How to avoid becoming flawed.

The fruit of lips thanks to His name,
Never neglects in doing good;
Share what you have as you proclaim,
Sacrificed to please as it should.

Obey your leaders who rule you,
And keeping watch over your soul;
In giving account to construe,
The focus of the nation’s goal.

A joyful route rather than grief,
Which would be of no advantage;
As your faith has a firm belief,
That is increasing your knowledge.

We are sure of a clear conscience,
Desired to act honestly;
Be honorable in essence,
Doing it all diligently.

I urge you to be more earnest,
That law and order be restored;
As being in the best interest,
An heirloom as our reward.

May the God of peace have again,
Brought up from the dead our Lord;
The Great Shepherd for to attain,
For His sheep be in one accord.

By His blood of the covenant,
Equip you with everything good;
An eternal life made permanent,
Well-pleasing to God as it should.

Copyright © 2024 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CXCX DEDE FGFG HXHX IAIA XJXJ XJXJ KEKE X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111010 10111111 11111110 11010101 1111010 0101111 00111101 11010101 01111111 10010101 11111101 1011111 01110111 01011011 01001101 01010101 01011011 11111010 11110101 11010110 11110110 01011100 11000010 10111000 11111110 11010101 11000110 1111001 10111101 11101101 01101101 11110101 11110100 0111101 101011100 11011111 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,197
Words 265
Sentences 10
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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Shepherd of the Sheep Hebrews 13:14-21

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Written on January 10, 2024

Submitted by richardnsherrer on January 09, 2024

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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