Analysis of I Don't Belong in Heaven



I don't belong in Heaven, NO!
I am not good enough.
The dirty rags of sin still show
I'm filled with sinful stuff!

I don't deserve to see my God
Except for punishment.
And so I would be very awed
If hell I was not sent.

The Bible says, "God commanded his love toward us, in that, while we were yet sinners, Christ died for us. *

I don't belong in Heaven so,
I'm humbled more each day
Because my God will let me go
To Him with faith today!


Scheme ABAB XXXX X ACAC
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 111101 01011111 111101 11011111 011100 01111101 111111 0101101011011011101101111 11010101 110111 01111111 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 455
Words 105
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1, 4
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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We are all sinners!

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Written on January 15, 2024

Submitted by stevec.24118 on January 15, 2024

Modified by stevec.24118 on January 15, 2024

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