Analysis of Be aware of what lys beneath



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Be aware of what lys beneath

I can taste it In the air how you did me wrong and it changes the rainbow from bright colors to dark. Your deceit poisons the air from coast to coast. I will not linger on what you've done for to do so would allow your darkness to continue to contaminate my saved soul. Through my faith and praise to God I will let go of this hurt you have caused and always put my sight on our Heavenly Father and once again cleanse my existence with the blood of Jesus.
I know the name of the destroyer and upon knowing his name I will shrink his being among us all the children of God. Against the darkness of Diablo  and all others that do not believe in the presence of God I will give no energy to the unholy. Only in the presence of God in our hearts and soul will we find the joy and peace that does exist on this planet. Once we begin our search for it daily we will learn to naturally know immediately where these pockets of God's joy and peace ly constantly. Our searches will expand these pockets and the brightness of God's love will begin to take over the entire planet.


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Characters 1,111
Words 218
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 2
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 221
Words per line (avg) 54
Letters per stanza (avg) 441
Words per stanza (avg) 109
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Written on January 19, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on January 19, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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