Analysis of Few Seem Seeking New Summits To Find



Few seem these days to be seeking,
New heights to climb.
And their summits to reach.
With a doing done to explore beyond,
Mental limits placed upon themselves...
Restricting to face opportunities,
Free to receive them given.
If they dared to adventure,
Leaving comfort zones known.

Too many condone their own lives to live,
In a repetitive routine.
Relying upon an addicting to nonsense.
With a dose of it prepared and shared,
Around others awaiting...
To add their lack of using common sense.
While all are left to feel relieved,
That no one expresses to be happy.
And done to admit of being blessed,
On a daily basis to expect...
Being aggravated by someone.
Who knows just how to lift their spirits up!

'The World is in a total disaster.
And everything I paid less for last week?
Has doubled in price.
Yet...'On Sale' signs are everywhere.
Taking 50% off on items overpriced,
A year ago!'

'Well...
There is one thing,
We all can look forward to coming.'

'Oh?
Like what?'

'Cars battery powered.
With everything attached to electricity.
Even artificially connected intelligence.
And when there is blackout,
Because of a collapse of over use...
Of an outdated infrastructure.
We all can sit around campfires made.
Hoping someone has a lighter or match.
To burn gasoline bought for pennies.
While singing KUMBAHYAH together.'

'What a fantastic idea.
But,
I think we all should right now...
Become proactive.
And gather sticks to learn,
How best to rub them together.
Just in case they may be needed.'

'That to do would be going backward.
Not forward in times like these!'

'And...
You say that to mean what?'


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111110 1111 011011 1010110101 101010101 010110100 1101110 1111010 101011 1100111111 00010001 010011010110 101110101 0110010 1111110101 11111101 1110101110 011011101 101010101 1010011 1111111101 0110010010 010111111 11001 1111110 10111010 0101 1 1111 111110110 1 11 110010 1100110100 1001000100100 01111 0110011101 1110010 111101101 101101011 11101110 1101010 10010010 1 1111111 01110 010111 11111010 10111110 111111010 1100111 0 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,615
Words 337
Sentences 42
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 9, 12, 6, 3, 2, 10, 7, 2, 2
Lines Amount 53
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Written on January 27, 2024

Submitted by lpahtillah on January 27, 2024

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