Analysis of The Love I Feel

Nancy Rodriguez 1965 (United States)



            The Love I Feel
            By Nancy Rodriquez

The love I feel for you is strong ,

To not be with you seems wrong ,
Our love can outshine the sun ,
We took a pause , when we should have taken the plunge ,
Our relationship is not over before it truly begun,
Look into my eyes and find what you need ,
Take my hand  ,  flourish, and feed ,
On the passion which has been stored up for you ,
I will make your dreams come true ,
We can have everything and more ,
You know it is you alone , I adore ,
You are my skies and every heart beat ,
Let’s have victory , and taste not defeat ,
I will take you on the best journey ,
Where two hearts can never be lonely ,
Love is a well flowing with honey ,
Let your inhibitions go ,
As we find our rhythm , and let it show ,
This love I feel surrounds us in warmth ,
As a blanket is to our bodies , is how much we will soar.


Scheme XX A ABXBCCDDEEFFGGGHHXE
Poetic Form
Metre 0111 110010 01111111 1111111 1011101 110111111001 1001011100111001 1011101111 1111001 10101111111 1111111 1111001 1111101101 1111010011 1110001101 111110110 111110110 110110110 110101 11110100111 111101101 1010111010111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 877
Words 186
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 19
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 210
Words per stanza (avg) 64

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Written on January 28, 2024

Submitted by txpoet65 on January 28, 2024

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