Analysis of Treacherous



The treacherous ones have dealt treacherously..

Their Twisting me to bits!

Women and children rule over us..

We are all in the pits.

Engulfed by evil

They have the way??

Don't despair, we won't be there!

We are meeting him in the clouds..

Funny thing this thing called sin what's it all about?

Not about you and me..

It's plain to see..

(Ever growing snouts.)

The righteous judge don't hold a grudge...

But He knows what we are.

That I shall fly

And leave behind

Makes me a superstar!

All is vain..

To Him it's plain...

You have not received your birth.

When you do you will know it's true that He owns the earth.

Created to be inhabited.

It will receive new birth.

Deception is spun..
His Spirit will come...
To a remant from the church-

To show the way by everyday living what they learnt.

To have dominion to rule with Him

First you must be drawn in...

Yes  then on that day

When He returns to rule...

We will say

How did we stray

How could we be such fools.


Scheme A B X B A C X X X D D X X E A X E F F G G X G XXX X X X C A C C X
Poetic Form
Metre 01001111 110111 100101101 111001 01110 1101 1011111 11101001 101111111101 101101 1111 10101 01011101 111111 1111 0101 11001 111 1111 1110111 1111111111101 010110100 110111 01011 11011 101101 1101110110111 110101111 111110 11111 110111 111 1111 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,021
Words 248
Sentences 27
Stanzas 32
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 3, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Written on January 29, 2024

Submitted by myway6119 on January 29, 2024

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