Analysis of The man with the golden eyes.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



One moment in time.

The clouds may turn a shade gray, but I'm here for you today. Sometimes your eyes of heaven shine. But they're his gold, and they're often declined. The external summer will never fade. Even if the clouds turn gray, death drags you into his shade. So long as men can see you, you still belong to me. I can give you the life that you need. Just count on me to do your deeds. His flashing eyes and floating hair are all a lie; now you can see it's no big surprise. I'm still your guy.


Scheme X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11001 011101111111010111110111110110010010101101101011111101111111111110111111101111111111111101010111011111111011111
Characters 503
Words 102
Sentences 11
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 191
Words per line (avg) 50
Letters per stanza (avg) 191
Words per stanza (avg) 50

About this poem

I tried to make this poem about a bunch of things and about a guy and a girl. The guy's not too nice.

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Written on February 07, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on February 07, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on February 07, 2024

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