Analysis of The promise to love brings you the essence of life

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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The promise to love brings you the essence of life.

In each other's arms we're dancing across the horizon at sunset and every single second of our love is creating sparks to match the rays of the setting sun. Through a daily commitment over 44yrs there is a gentle force that we built and it burns with a glow that illuminates the sky in the night-time darkness.  Look upon your lover with the same need and passion all others and you will find the magic that exists when you are in love. The years will only slow down when you are in each other's arms however one day when looking back you will say forever is not enough when in love.


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Characters 649
Words 124
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 172
Words per line (avg) 41
Letters per stanza (avg) 259
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Written on February 10, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on February 11, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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