Analysis of The rains came down.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



The rains came down.

I have a promise to keep. And I have miles to go before I sleep. I can hear the echoes of your heartbeat. My perfect world is torn apart now that you are gone. The conflict I have is between love and hate, and I know it's wrong. I feel before me that the day blinds my eyes. As I wait for the light for a while. The sea stood still because you're not by my side, then the rain came down like buckets out of the sky and washed me clean. So that I may look upon your beauty just one more time. Just give me one more moment, and I will be fine. 


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Poetic Form
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Characters 566
Words 122
Sentences 12
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 214
Words per line (avg) 60
Letters per stanza (avg) 214
Words per stanza (avg) 60

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I was just laying on the couch bored and decided to write this.

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