Analysis of Tighten Your Belt



Oga Preseedo, we hear you
You say make we tighten our belt
Make we de saakpa, de live a fasting life
Cos dis time naa austere times
But you loose di rope of your shokoto
And sit-don dey chop life
Ten wraps of amala with éwedu soup
With brokoto, shaki and orisirisi
 Alone you dey gulp down dis big mountain
Until your bellé blow up like blom-blom

You say make we tighten our belt
 Dis time naa austere times
Make we de ride bicycle de go work
Cos the price of fuel e don cost
Now government don remove subsidy
Make bank de charge us heavy tax
And make we de make sacrifices
Cos we de rebuild our country

But you carri all the moni for bullion van
You go buy for yourself a bullet proof jeep
Make e de jump all the potholes and gullies
And de shield you from di unknown gunmen

Oga Politician, I hail O!
As them de talk'm for street,
Who don blow, don blow


Scheme xAbcabxcxx Acxxdxxd xxxx exe
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 111110101 1111110101 1111011 11111111 011111 1111111 11101 0111111110 011111111 111110101 111011 1111100111 101110111 1100101100 11111101 01111100 111011010 1111011101 11110101011 1111101010 011111011 1010111 1111111 11111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 862
Words 176
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 10, 8, 4, 3
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 168
Words per stanza (avg) 43

About this poem

This poem is written in broken English (pidgin), to depict the language of the common man in Nigeria and what they suffer in hands of the political leaders. They ask us to tighten our belt for this is austere times. But we watch them live the most unimaginable ostentatious live, while the mass live penury. What a double vision!

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Written on February 12, 2024

Submitted by Benny11 on February 14, 2024

Modified by Benny11 on June 10, 2024

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Benson Chukwueke

Owerri, Nigeria since 1971. This is how I process and express my innermost cogitations; sitting back with pen and paper, painting words and polishing them until they become flowered verses. I guess for these actions, I could be called a poet or what do think? more…

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