Analysis of She stops the air

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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She stops the air

She is a lightening bolt in my life that turns my head right around. When she walks into my room everything stops and the silence is broken only by the way she fills up a room. It's hard to breathe because her beauty removes all the air. I can't stand still because she moves every molecule in my body to excitement.  She defines my existence because she loves me and I see nothing but her.


Scheme XX X
Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
Metre 1 1101 11010010111111101111011110100101101010111101111101010011011111011110010011010101011010011110111010
Characters 422
Words 81
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 111
Words per line (avg) 27
Letters per stanza (avg) 167
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Written on February 27, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on February 27, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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