Analysis of As I lay by your side.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



As I lay by your side.

As I lay here, they shut my eyes. But I can see you; I'm right by your side. I do not sleep; I'm awake. For heaven's sake, you whisper in my ears the things I want to hear. I'm still in love with you, my dear. I can't cry; I have no more tears. I can't move, but yet here I stand. Could you hold my hand? Why do you weep when I'm not asleep? I won't let you go. Tomorrow, you will know. You can't go where I must go. So be happy for me, and our love will still grow. Now you know.


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Characters 506
Words 113
Sentences 16
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 180
Words per line (avg) 55
Letters per stanza (avg) 180
Words per stanza (avg) 55

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This poems about death and sorrow. But there's always a tomorrow.

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Written on February 27, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on February 27, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on February 27, 2024

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